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December 12, 2012
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Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
TG-820
Shutter Speed
1/400 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 12, 2012, 5:13:22 AM
Software
Version 1.0
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Here comes the storm 2 by Tianibean Here comes the storm 2 by Tianibean
I like this one!:boogie:
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Since you request critique, here comes the critique:

You have a nice camera making it already easy, right?
Well, the art that makes the photo better is the focus...

The first thing, you are pointing t the sky, because there the clouds are for the rain, but the sky is blurred.

The focus of the camera is on the trees and the other black figures. This makes the contrast between the trees and sky nice, but it blurs.

Further, you might keep in mind to not capture too close figures, like the [car?], it's all blurry, and keeps more of the picture out.
What do you think?
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