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Edit 1 Holy crap!! I was not expecting about 70 favorites in a day and a half!!! Thank you guys sooo much!!!

Been wanting to draw Spirit X3 That and i am in a horse drawing mood X3

I used a stock to help me out :ashamed:
here is the stock [link] and it is by ~BillTokioHotel
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First, let me clear my good name and say that I wasn't too certain what is meant by the "Vision" rating; so if the rating upsets you, my ignorance is probably to blame. X3

Okay, down to business, and please note that I merely state my opinions and suggestions and intend no offense:

Proportionally, you have it spot on except perhaps where the hooves are concerned, which look just a tad too large. I would advise shrinking the hooves slightly, and perhaps altering the shape to be more triangular and a tad less rounded, so the feet are proportional to the long pasterns and cannons. Here's a diagram of a horse's foot that may help with this: [link]

Regarding specifically the attributes of the Kiger mustang, the line of the spine is straight (kudos!), and the slope of the hindquarters and curve of the withers and neck are excellent. I would advise (using this image of a Kiger mustang and this labeled diagram of a horse for reference) a higher line between the hip and dock before curving down for the buttocks. The chest I would suggest make slightly less barrel, at least for this particular angle. The belly is perfect, and the musculature lines and shading are quite splendid. I would suggest refining the muzzle and adding the chin, and perhaps tilting the pointed tip of the nostril slightly higher so that it points toward the top of the muzzle instead.

Hope this helps! Critique aside, I think this is a wonderful rendering of Spirit! :love:
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ultimaterave Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist
now that's a horsey!
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha! Thanks!!:D
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I loved that movie. =) I was in ~5th grade when it came out.
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I STILL love this movie!!!
wow really? what year?
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Well the movie came out in 2002 so I was about 10. =)
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lets see i was 4 years old then:)
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww. ; w; We're 6 years apart haha.
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha :XD: lol
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NikalaTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That's a freakin good pictire
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks!:glomp:
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NikalaTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No problem.
It's awesome
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks again!:XD::glomp:
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blueMALOU Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconwowplz::eyepopping::blush::faint::ambulance::iconimdeadplz::iconawesome-plz::headbang:
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:XD: :bow:
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blueMALOU Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:D
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Emily0728 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this movie, it is one of my all time favorites! You did so good on this! Keep up the good work!
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol this is one of my most favorite movies :D
Thanks and i will!
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Emily0728 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how many years did it take for you to get so good at drawing!?
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I have been drawing for my whole life, but really started drawing when i was in the 4th grade(i am now in the 8th grade) :) And that was just drawing wolves, i started drawing horses last year :)
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Emily0728 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow im in 5th grade! i just turned 11 on the 14th. i have been drawing since i was 2 thou/:
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wow cool! I am turning 15 in November.............. i feel old -__-
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Emily0728 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL! how old ARE you?
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i am 14 :XD:
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Puzzlepup Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ITS MY HORSIE HERO <3333333 I'VE BEEN COLLECTING HIS STUFF SINCE I WAS LIKE 2 YEARS OLDDDD I HAD A BIRTHDAY BASED ON HIM <333
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oh cool! He is mah cartoon horse hero :la:
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Puzzlepup Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YESSSS
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
My horse hero is Secretariat :D
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Puzzlepup Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't ever heard of him...
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
O__O the fasted race horse in history !
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Puzzlepup Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't watch horse races ^^;
I went to one though when I was little, went with my grandma and her friend who I called granpa jim
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ever seen the movie?
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Seeburglar Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cute! He looks great in your style, Tiani! Nice work! :D
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks! This was fun to draw X3 (with the stocks help :giggle:)
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Seeburglar Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome! :huggle: Yes, stock images are great to use. (I use them all the time, too!) You're definitely on a good equine-roll! :D
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
X3 this was my first time using a stock image X3
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Seeburglar Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
In that case, I'm glad you found it helpful! :dance: I really do think it makes drawing horses easier, especially the legs. (Horse legs just look so different from different positions!) If I didn't use references, I think all my horse pictures would be like my stick-figure Ellis! :giggle:
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:giggle: lol :XD: yeah horse legs are hard to draw X3
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ShalaskaLuna Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Great job ! Amazing :la:
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks :D it was fun to draw X3
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CrazyJefffersonian Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Looks beautifull! OwO
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks :D it was fun to draw X3
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Rawr-Horse Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
This.

I loveeeee <333

SPIRIT<3
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :D
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Rawr-Horse Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
no probs >:3
i also sketched out your Daerta's body, just need to trace it and color it but my mom took my ipod so iunno if ill be able to post it for a bit sowwieee D:.
ill try and get it back tomorrow...
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
its okay :pat: take you time :D i don't rush:)
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Rawr-Horse Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
lol kaiii.
>;3
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:D
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Rawr-Horse Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
>:3
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:XD:
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