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Spirit by Tianibean Spirit by Tianibean
Edit 1 Holy crap!! I was not expecting about 70 favorites in a day and a half!!! Thank you guys sooo much!!!

Been wanting to draw Spirit X3 That and i am in a horse drawing mood X3

I used a stock to help me out :ashamed:
here is the stock [link] and it is by ~BillTokioHotel
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First, let me clear my good name and say that I wasn't too certain what is meant by the "Vision" rating; so if the rating upsets you, my ignorance is probably to blame. X3

Okay, down to business, and please note that I merely state my opinions and suggestions and intend no offense:

Proportionally, you have it spot on except perhaps where the hooves are concerned, which look just a tad too large. I would advise shrinking the hooves slightly, and perhaps altering the shape to be more triangular and a tad less rounded, so the feet are proportional to the long pasterns and cannons. Here's a diagram of a horse's foot that may help with this: [link]

Regarding specifically the attributes of the Kiger mustang, the line of the spine is straight (kudos!), and the slope of the hindquarters and curve of the withers and neck are excellent. I would advise (using this image of a Kiger mustang and this labeled diagram of a horse for reference) a higher line between the hip and dock before curving down for the buttocks. The chest I would suggest make slightly less barrel, at least for this particular angle. The belly is perfect, and the musculature lines and shading are quite splendid. I would suggest refining the muzzle and adding the chin, and perhaps tilting the pointed tip of the nostril slightly higher so that it points toward the top of the muzzle instead.

Hope this helps! Critique aside, I think this is a wonderful rendering of Spirit! :love:
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ultimaterave Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist
now that's a horsey!
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha! Thanks!!:D
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I loved that movie. =) I was in ~5th grade when it came out.
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I STILL love this movie!!!
wow really? what year?
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Well the movie came out in 2002 so I was about 10. =)
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lets see i was 4 years old then:)
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww. ; w; We're 6 years apart haha.
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha :XD: lol
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NikalaTheUnicorn Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That's a freakin good pictire
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Tianibean Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks!:glomp:
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