Ace's wings Chapter 1 Out on a grassy hill, there were two boys were playing tag. Those two boys are my brothers. They look like they are having a lot of fun. I wish i could be with them. But, no! I have to stay inside with mom, because of my father . He doesn't pay any attention to me. I don't know why though.Mom says that he loves me. But i don't think so by the way he treats me. Tomorrow is my birthday, i am going to turn 10."Ace! Come down here kiddo!"Oh, mom is calling me, better go see what she wants Ace closed his journal and put his pencil down. He ran down the stares to see what his mom want."Hey can you come help me move the couch?""Y
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